I will share some of my writing WALT. Add discriptive words to our nouns
I'm in the hospital bed because I need to get nostrils drilled into my nose. The doctors the getting the anaesthetics ready for me. They give me a strong scent oxygen mask and I fall into a deep dark sleep.
I'm just in a strange dream of weird nothing 'well that's how I would describe it' I woke a with a massive jolt 'I guess time flys'