The Pleasing Pleasant Pie
The boiling mince was like bubbling lava.
Like a fresh juicy guava.
As the cheese melted my stomach pelted.
As the cheese melted my stomach pelted.
As the pastry puffed I was already stuffed.
When i had finished my pie my poem began to die.
I did alliteration for my title because I'm weird.
I did rhyme because i don't believe in poems with out rhyming words.
I think i am at relational because i used a few language features and i can describe why in used them.
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