Wednesday, 2 July 2014

my writing

Businesses or Consumers ? who has the most responsibility. Do Businesses have more responsibility under the fair trading laws or the Consumers having to follow the Consumers guarantees act?

I believe this paragraph shows that I have put my writing in order and put in a really good opening question/sentence.

I think I am at relational because I cant be extended abstract because nothings perfect.

My next step is to add a closing sentence to  my writing.

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